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Am I a skater or a distraction? by mangrowing

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This upgrade is awesome, not saying the original wasn't, but I can see the changes made. Starting with the feet, in the original they seemed very narrow and slightly on the long side kinda similar to clown shoes while here they look perfectly proportionate. The chain holding up the one side of the pants was definitely a needed touch. Your originals pants just seemed to be floating with nothing keeping them up, so for the added chain I applaud. Holding the board behind her was definitely the way to go. Having her holding it to her side just seemed to put it out of place. And finally her breasts are much proportionate in comparison to the original. In the original her right breast only pressed out over the top where as here her arm is against her right breast and it is pushing out both the top and bottom of her arm giving it much better feel. I love the texture in the hair as well, and I couldn't help but notice the small set of breasts on the person's phone, get me alil chuckle. With all this said I give you a perfect score on the grounds that I absolutely love this piece as well as all of your pieces. Have a Merry Christmas my friend.
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mangrowing Dec 24, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Thank u very much for your observations and critiques, I really apreciate you take your time to write this! :)

Merry Christmas too!
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